Wednesday, September 24, 2008

my trysts with gals

gal1,I say "hey
coffee??" she says "no way".

gal2 ,"coffee?" "Done."
but, she says it ain't fun

gal3,it's(the relationship) stagnant
shud i be belligerent??(inputs required)

don't ask me hu the gals are
that's wer is the bar.

i speak to the Gods"am i being despo?"
here's the reply"no, just be on the lookout for a bimbo".

no offense
because,I got no defense.

Y r my attempts futile?
dimpy says "cut the detail"

will this happen to me forever
chudi says watever

cya guys wid my next
i think i can promise it wud be more of context.

afraid to blog
fearing junta might not go for the slog :)...

6 comments:

Priyatham said...

nice start wordsworth :P
continue ur trysts wid gals, and hopefully wen ur heartz broken enuf, u can give us a 'Romeo and Juliet' ;)

chandu said...

leave aside "romeo and juliet"..
he ll surely give us a headache :P

chandu said...

anyhow..nice way to let out all the frustration (:P)..needles to say effort is seen in "trying" to be poetic..

Sir A.K.R said...

Kick starter
4 a career?
find another
it 'll be better!

Don't bother
just kidding brother
donno whether
u'll be the next Tagore!!

Sass said...

Lol... Nice one Dude..
You are a Poet
and we didnt even Know it.. :D
keep it up..
gals will definitely fall for ur poetry.. ;)

Wen is the next one coming?

TheSecondMan said...

yay!! i am in ur blog.
and the 1st one was really good..